Week #3 100 Word Challenge

I woke up one morning, I was getting out of bed when I slipped and broke my ankle. Dad called the ambulance. The men put me onto the bed and started driving away. I felt safe in the vehicle but it seemed to be going backwards, like it was falling. I looked out my window and we were sliding down a big cliff. They tried to stop then we ran out of gas and started rolling backwards down the hill and crashed into a house. I broke my arm. If I could go back in time I would just stay in bed.

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  1. HillcrestBlog33 October 2018 at 13:47

    Hello Dancer6482,
    This is an interesting use of the prompt; it is quite dramatic and humorous. You have a strong opening sentence to grab the reader’s attention. Well done. Remember that the focus of today's lesson was to avoid repeating words in such a short piece of writing e.g. 'I' and 'bed'. Keep on writing and learning.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

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